Do Not Move

Christmas is getting close.
And you are looking for you brother to come back from military to spend holidays with him.
But something went wrong..
One morning, you found a note and breakfast on your bed...
Even though you live alone.
And in the next moment, you saw a stranger in your room.
Would you try to escape or give up?
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Its a demo.
So please tell me my mistakes and suggestions to improve.